Hello.
How's it going, guys?

This is my 90 seconds music.
Everything is done by me.

UnMastered version

Mastered by me

Mastered by @No Avenger version
http://audiosex.pro/threads/90-seconds-of-my-music.69175/page-2#post-690782

Is the extended version necessary to make?

And please let me know what you think.
Any constructive feedback is appreciated.

I hope you all have a wonderful day.

 

Last edited: Feb 12, 2023

great stuff!

 

Sounds like competent video game music that would play in the background whilst your selecting the game options.

 

Wow, sounds great! Always enjoy your songs. Sweet. Bravo.

 

Nice music, a bit harsh sounding though, and loud (which is probably related). If i had to guess i'd say you were looking for a powerful epic sound and ended up pushing a limiter too hard. Maybe look for alternatives to making it sound epic without distorting?

I don't think so. Maybe a second part or something related to it, but the song feels as long as it needs to be.

 

Hello guys...

Many thanks

You also sense it?
It's true. This soundtrack was inspired by video game music.
And many thanks for your feedback.

Many thanksss

Always? I believe this is my first upload. However, I sincerely appreciate your listening and commenting.
Thank you

Many thanks

In order to match the general reference I heard, I want to make the loudness similar.

Do you know how?

I understand. Many thanks

Hello.
I guess that means "yes".
Thanks

 

I liked it. There are maybe a few things to touch up, but I think you should definitely finish it into a full piece. It is quite busy already, and a longer arrangement will lend you some more space. It's also already good as it is, just made for different purpose like movie trailer/commercial short.

 

Maybe that refeference wasn't that good?

 

Like it! I like the modulation with strings :30 -> :42. That's why I would like to hear such things clearer

 

I'm thinking compression shennanigans, some re-ballancing of stuff. But what was the reference? Because you might actually be spot on and i'm just bitching about it for no reason.

Also, whe you say:

Do you mean LUFS or actual listening loudness?

 

Oh, my bad then. I mistook you for another member here who also makes (more metal ) dope songs.

@No Avenger , help me with this one, you helped her I think. Perhaps one of her songs was called Artemisc? Do something ...

 

You own the future, you come at the right time with the right sound. Market yourself well - you have the chance to become famous.

 

Wima maybe?

 

Amazing track, just lost a little balance after:34 sec, the strings section just went under just bothered me a little, cauz that rundown or fall string nice element there think it should be heard out loud, and also heard some brass elements but not sure. Ill have listen later after my ear gains more control. Any ways great track 10+ likes from me
good luck

 

Hi guys...

Many thanks for your feedback, appreciate it

Making a longer version is something I'm considering. The problem is that I haven't considered what kind of arrangement would be best for extending the 90 seconds.
However, I will set aside some time soon to concentrate on the arrangement.
Many thanks.

Maybe.
I use two different references. Even my work is not as close to the reference.

Many thanks.
Honestly, I really like the fast ostinato for music like this.
I'm still learning it.
I appreciate your attention to that section.

I think my guitar sound is muddying the song. Haha.
I'm trying my best.
The song One Winged Angel is wonderful (FF-VII Movie Sephiroth theme). And that inspires me about metal and orchestra.

Maybe someday I'll be able to create such a grand piece.

Do I need to post my unmastered mix here for you to check?

There are multiple references, but one of the video references is included in this post.

Perhaps more to actual listening loudness.
I haven't even checked how loud my finished music is yet. (in LUFSi)

Wow, that's intriguing.
That's okay brother.

If you say "her", and song about Artemisc , and her nickname is WIMA, I think I know who you mean.

Long story short,
She was the leader of ARTHEMISC before stepping down. She seemed to have a problem and left everything to me.
In fact, she taking down all of the earlier videos on Arthemisc YouTube channel. And I have to start over from beginning.

Wow... Do you exaggerate it?
I appreciate you taking the time to listen to my music and share your thoughts with me.
Many thanks

So, other than game developers, is there a market for music like this? If so, that's great and good news.

Many thanks

Alright, this is advise and a lesson I must to learn. Thank you very much for providing feedback.

 

Last edited: Feb 10, 2023

I am a few older and have seen many musicians come and go. I've listened to a lot of different music.

With your music I immediately noticed that it fits wonderfully in this time or in other words you are doing the right thing at the right time.
Since every day millions of people upload music and everyone is vying for the attention of listeners or paying customers, it is increasingly difficult to bring his products to the man or woman. I don't know how many pieces of music you have made so far, but if it sounds like this piece, I would create a promo CD and introduce you to all possible companies.

Good music and ideas want to get into the world and therefore to the people,
But for that you have to do something, so I want to encourage you to go on and do more.

I myself do sound design:
Sonic Sirius - Synthesizer Soundsets
Freeware Soundsets for Software and Hardware Synthesizer
http://ohlenbostelhelge.magix.net/public/

 

I really like the "vibe" and the general composition. It sounds really good and definitely Nier-esque. I agree the mix sounds a bit harsh, though.

Personally, I would not extend it, maybe just "stretch" it a little. For example, the change at 0:41 sounds a bit forced to me. I would let certain parts breath more. I don't think you need to jump from an idea to idea every 10 seconds, but this is just my personal opinion.

On a side note, it's Merethe Soltvedt from Jaeger by Audio Imperia, isn't it? What else did you use? I'm just curious.

 

Done, reported.

 

Good references are the key and you need to dissect them into composing, arranging, mixing and mastering, thoroughly.
FF VII has all parts, percussions, strings, brass, drums, bass, guitars and choir - but not at the same time. Like most of these tracks and most orchestral pieces, the various sections come and go. For instance, the focus is on the strings melody? Hold the guitar chords, skip percussions and brass (or at least take their levels down).
Keep in mind, the faster, fuller and louder the song is, the more difficult it is to mix and master it in a punchy and transparent way.

Could be interesting.