Would appreciate some feedback on my latest track! (Synthwave)

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  1. Stryda22

    Stryda22 Member

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    Good evening friends and (not as close as I'd like) family!

    I come here this wonderful quarantivening to present to you my latest monstrosity!

    Prepare for an overdose of Aviator Shades, Convertables, Midnight Beach Cruises, Miami Sp/V-ice, Being Chased By Police On A Highway For Snorting Cocaine Off Of The Police Woman's Breasts (she was saving it for later and now she mad) and not to forget...
    SYNTHS!

    Long story short.. would you guys be so kind to tell me what you think? It isn't completely done yet. Had a go at mixing and thought I got pretty far in the sence of clarity.



    Cheers! Much love.
     
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  3. mrpsanter

    mrpsanter Audiosexual

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    Sounds good, I like it.
    What did you use?
     
  4. stoiximan

    stoiximan Platinum Record

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    Pretty good track but i would like a more soft bassline
     
  5. Stryda22

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    DAW: Reaper
    Drums: Battery 4
    Musical elements: all Omnisphere
    Effects: mainly Fabfilter and Valhalla vintage reverb

    Care to elaborate? Do you mean the underlying constant 16th E note?

    Thanks for the replies guys :)
     
  6. Yellow Raven

    Yellow Raven Producer

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    Hi there,

    well it's a nice tune to start with congratulation on that
    my only advice is the hi hat, it is too upfront and to syncopated esp in the intro.
    maybe make it a 16th rhythm to keep the the beat driving or add a 16th shaker thing
    2nd the toms are a bit too loud and the piano like motif too low in the mix
    i am no expert though just a music lover
    take care and best of luck to you :wink:
     
  7. sir jack spratsky

    sir jack spratsky Producer

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    keep your powder dry mate......introduce elements sparingly
     
  8. stoiximan

    stoiximan Platinum Record

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    Yes i think it needs some eq or something to fit better in the mix but overall the track is super
     
  9. Stryda22

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    Thanks guys ^^ appreciate the input! Won't be touching this one for a few months just so I don't make it worse. But will be taking all you's guy's advice along to the next project! Major cheers!
     
  10. Citizen20

    Citizen20 Noisemaker

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    i really like this. 80s feel without the awful dated cheese
     
  11. Sacculus

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    I finally can feel it coming from 2020 dude :)) nice work keep it rockin- cool arrangement that keep interrest too!
     
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