Edit* Re-did the vocals and mixed and mastered so that it's not as "bassy".....I'm happier with the whole thing but still if anyone feels they want to give it a go on vocals, feel free....


Thanks

Just can't get my vocals sounding decent, with enough "Oomph".....got a chesty cold which doesn't help.

Anybody wanna try???! : )



Here's a backing track....I've tweaked the EQ....sounded too bassy...





Lyrics

Now my ears sting
I've been playing too loud
I've been trying everything
Just to please this crowd

But they're setting me aside...
I can see it in the way that they move
They're singing to themselves
"This ain't no groove"!
Don't worry, I'll be finished in time
We can go back to mine
Stay up all night....

Well these bad heads
When the morning comes
Feels like someones inside of me
Just starting out to learn the drums

But as long as you're here
We may as well appear to disappear
Don't worry I'm just finding my way
So why don't you stay?
Just for Today...

Oh the bridge lights
Where we took our stroll
Feel like they're still watching us
As we make our way home

Whats with you in my mind
I could feel this way forever
And I'm telling myself
Just let the feeling grow..
No more wine please, it's gone to my head
Some things are better left unsaid
Lets go to bed

So the night comes
We're just hanging around
Though I don't really know you
I get the feeling that I've been found

Cause you're hearing me say
Things I never thought I would ever say
You catch me looking at you every time!
Maybe it's a sign
We're feeling sublime

 

Last edited: Apr 17, 2021

I ask my friend and she sing this.
Here You go

 

I just spit out my morning coffee all over my keyboard. You f%$&$%&$*.... ok, I knew the risks, fair enough

 

Better than my effort.... Where can I sign them up?!

 

She is ok to signing only to the biggest records like Sonic Music, Warning Music, Virgin Recordings or Universal Music Depublishing.

 

I cried when sang

!!
Her voice is so pure. If I didn't already know she was a she, I'd think the singer was a beautiful young castrato.

 

dude, I just signed up to say it sounds great. kinda got a lou reed / bowie thing going on. I wish I could sing this well!

Surely some VST wizardry can get it a bit more pumping if thats what you want?

edit: was just on your soundcloud. Are you trolling us? your tracks are great!

 

Now that's a shame....I reckon we could have made some beautiful music together! ; )

 

Sorry....didn't mean to upset you !!!!!!

 

Haha...No not trolling!!!....Honestly don't like my voice (I'm not a singer) but out of necessity find myself having to try anyways....Don't know any singers or mix in situations whereby I'd meet one

 

me too.