I didn't change it from the first one. Maybe it irritated you before but there was more to focus on earlier
Cheers for the post though. Next go at it I'll centre it a bit more and see how that goes.
The final version I put up will have the full lyrics, which I'm just finishing off, and that'll probably be it before moving on to something else.

Appreciate your input.

 

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A left over from a transpose experiment, but sure, I guess you, at least, have to take your victories where ever you can

 

lowpass the vocoder and phaser-synth (starshower synth) it carries alot of white-noise

 

I see you changed that C# over the Am, to a C like I suggested.............

You're welcome.

 

Like I wrote above, you were second cab off the rank, already beaten to it by another member with no snark informative, constructive advice, but if you want to troll me and claim a little bit of credit for that advice from someone else, in my song topic, then I was right about you needing to take a 'victory' when you can.

 

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No noise sources in either the pad or the vocoder, but I'll give it a go as an experiment

 

Nice attitude. Who gave you specific note recommendations again...... which you followed?
You're welcome.

You freely dish out insult posts all over this forum but you yourself can't take any constructive criticism?

Please bring back those hilarious C# notes over the Am and C chords, which definitely added originality and character.
Can you send me the original ?
I'm compiling a comedy music album.
Track order would be your original song right after Lil Wayne trying to play a guitar solo.

 

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trust me on this, that synths fluctuation, wanders across the whole spectrum, it collides alot with the highs and mostly with the vocals, try to lowpass first that synth with a 24/db and then the vocals maybe with a 12db rolloff and i can guarantee your drums will sound a bit clearer

 

Nice attitude, now that's irony.
So you want to still claim credit for being in second place, pointing out an error after @complete already had. Sure you got the note correct, but then after that previous, very specific informative help, naming the words with dissonance as they did, it was pretty bleedin obvious. Well done for spotting what he and I subsequently did.

Ah, so that's the truth of it. You should have just said from the get go you were still bummed out at being made to look like an ill educated, flat earth believing moron in that joke thread, than trying to score points over a musical error in a demo track that was noted and fixed before you even posted.
A bit petty of you, don't you think, and somewhat sad that you'd prefer to take the cheap shot in a creative thread rather than man up and address your anguish in the general discussion forums, but as is now obvious, you're merely looking for the win. Sorry champ, but you can't find it here. You've been busted.

No one cares except you

 

The comedy music playlist is now:
1. lil Wayne's epic guitar solo,
2. your ' what's the worst note to sing over Am ' ( I didn't hear it 'til it was pointed out) song
3. for some real singin' though

 

And now you just look like a desperate troll with a butt hurt hangup
I guess that makes me a triple time winner

 

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And even though, going from memory and your present actions, you're clearly a bit of an obsessive loon, I'm not reporting your troll posts.
No thanks from me for you coming last in a two horse race, but sure, for all the bump ups you keep giving me

 

Bless! You got it bad

 

From the scales' stand point, blending the notes C, E, G and C# produces the harmonic minor, diminished or augmented feelings that major-key addicts can't stand them. But it's their problem not the composer's.

I love your work.

 

All this time to hold a major grudge. Truly nothing diminished there then.
Trust me, this saddo's problems go way deeper than augmented feelings.


Thanks, as always, for the supportive comment, Foster911

 

If I was truly holding a grudge, my first post would've been something like:

Hey idiot, if you can't hear the difference between major and minor, music definitely is NOT for you. It must take some sub human mental discipline to ignore dissonance so obvious.

OR

Stop pretending imbecile, you don't even know the ABC's of music. Learn your fucking intervals before you turn on that DAW.

OR

Only a moron would proudly upload a song with multiple C# melody notes over an Am chord.

 

I feel I extended an olive branch, even though I'm repeatedly on the receiving end of unnecessary vitriol.
Check my first two posts of this thread.
Not only did I suggest the obvious correct note but my second post, I suggested a possible solution for the current state of no dynamics and lack of production.

Good luck @Judge Dredd here's my third suggestion.
Ask for a vocalist here at the AudioSex Community to collab with instead of unintelligible lyrics.

 

Bullshit. Just don't troll my post. Sorted.
Those last two posts are more passive aggressive nonsense.
You have a grudge and you still haven't let it go.