nice, i would add a tiny bit of info to such an upload, so we know if its just a "look, admire what i did" and we can skip (hopefully) dull eq tips etc. or if its "look what i managed to do, what do you think?". sometimes we know whats "wrong" and just want encouragement for what is good, and sometimes we want feedback/critique

anyhow, this is a great way to learn structure and also to realize how "thin" on instruments many vocal tracks have to really be to not compete with the vocals, not that this song is extremely thin but still.

now, the mix is ok, but i think there is a bit to much reverb/delay on some parts? specially in the beginning, i just gave it a fast listen on earbuds. nice job though