Hi, my first post here. check this out and give your reviews.

SoundCloud

Same Music Mixed with the inspired movie

 

Hi,

hm, I'm not so sure how to put this.
What would you like to get as feedback?

Just a few thoughts:
You're an adventurous musical explorer. That's great!
Your track is in at least 3 different scales and modes that don't go well with each other, especially if used at the same time. Plus, it's neither twelve-tone technique nor atonality.
There is no bass.
I don't see a distinct stucture.
You ask for feedback and how to improve, that's the right attitude to make it far

Bite the bullet and learn music theory.
If you want to make music based on melodies, there is no way round this.

for starters:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xLaw0CLTNfA

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b0t_9qFYmjg

and now back to work