What would You improve?

Discussion in 'Work in Process' started by Helvetica, Aug 19, 2017.

  1. Helvetica

    Helvetica Member

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    PS: I'm doubting at how the song is arranged, as it doesn't sound as interesting as I thought it would from the beginning of the project. While this is the main aspect I would like to change, any other (off-topic) suggestions are welcomed. Thanks!
     
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  3. Steve Andrews

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    IMO, maybe a little more flare (efx, atmo, white noise, crash, whatever u prefer, etc) in the beginning to really set up that vocal build-up and ultimately the rest of the track because it's pumping and moving VERY nicely after the intro. Just my 2 cents for what it's worth! Would like to hear any updates if you do re-edit.
     
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