So I was wanting to write something short today, like sort of a passage (in a way) and this came out and wanted to know what you think.
I personally don't like it much, it's like I feel the intention but it's not enough at all, but not appreciating myself is one of my virtues when I'm strict so I might being too hard on me and actually is better than I think, so some feedback would be appreciated.
Cheers!