My track is the result after I listened to their feedback. personally I think the volume of the kick is still too loud.

Curious to feedback done on anythign in the track which means arrangement or sounds or mixing and mastering. I put alot of effort in the track and it has been different alot of times. Hope u enjoy

 

I see and hear the same thing: turn the kick down a bit or turn something else up!

 

Not sure if kick should be quieter, it should be loud for this type of music. Maybe could be turned slightly down, but I think it's ok. Nice track anyways. Clap could be bit louder but might be just subjective taste

 

The kick is too dominant; the other instruments are there, but they don't really stand out. You can hear it immediately, and you've probably heard and noticed it yourself. Listen again with rested ears, perhaps on a different player.

 

like this the kick is the main thing going on there it should not be lowered