Hey every body, hope you're having a great day,

Well i start workin' on a new uplifting track yesterday, i had some blocks, and i don't know if i'm producing a good track,

So i'm asking for some feedback, helps getting this track done,

Hope i get some feedback about, track building, mixing, synths as well, as the idea,

Here we go :

http://soundcloud.com/mrlyannmusic/moon-of-my-life-id/s-kwNAU

Hope you like my work, and please write everything comes to your mind when listening to the track.

Have a nice day,

MLM.

Ps : click in order to listen click on "Listen on SoundCloud"

 

I'm not really an expert on the genre, but I guess all feedback is helpful...

Good start of the track, regular trance.

Nice melody evolving.

Maybe the track needs mor high end, it seems that the hihats and snare doesn't cut trough the mixes, they sound too compressed or something. Maybe just a highshelf boost around 10 kHz can be enough.

Everything else sounds fine.

 

Hmmmm... Everything seems to be there, in terms of production... And about more hi-end as manducator said, maybe you made them sounding subtle on purpose to fit the track mood.
I'm also not experienced in this type of EDM, even if i do produce EDM music as well, but i'm not experienced in Trance/Uplifting stuff.

In terms of arrangement though, while listening to your track an idea popped into my mind, like... on 0:28 where all the stuff starts kicking out, you can actually add something melodic before all the drums and stuff starts kicking, something similar to the 2:21 part.

I don't know if my idea would fit your genre, but i saw that most of the big artists break their "extended" intro drums, into a melody... and then they get it up to the point where all the complex stuff in the production are kicking in. This way you can make the track more interesting in the first half of it, because some people/listeners maybe they don't have the patience to wait or to skip to the point when they find out the interesting elements, and if you add something melodic in the beginning, it could represent a kind of "prediction" of what your audience can get later in the track.

Good luck, buddy!