Hi guys here some new tracks, all or most drum samples done myself and in general no presets.
Ableton user ;)

I started sharing my music to more people, i want to go to 250 plays.


(finished 3 days ago)


(this is slightly older) ;)

 

thank you for your feedback and for listening carefully! i thought so, maybe i should rework the track to make it more enjoyable. but i love the break somehow hahaha. Why do people hate surprises in music? ;)

 

Thanks for sharing your music. I agree with @No Avenger that Signal is better. Both on mix and arrangement. However, I do like the brake in Running as it serves to break the monotony of the track. I get the feeling that you were inspired by the break in "Information Society's I wanna know (what your thinking)." I will try to give the break a little more air, less saturation, and maybe add some chopped vocal FX but I will definitively keep it. I would try switching the section @2:47 to the beginning of the break and at the end of break have a 4 bar section with just the piano and synth before returning to the body of the song.

 

I like both tracks and opposed to the views mentioned above, prefer Running to Signal... even the mad break! But, maybe it goes on for too long!

Great work!