Any thoughts?

 

Last edited: Oct 27, 2019

There should be an option for excellent

 

Done.

 

Im working on new version.. Thanx all!

 

Sounds very "harsh" on my cans, (or is it just me?).

 

Hello To a certain degree I agree, but it's the style also?
Thanx

 

Maybe some tape saturation will take care of the harshness?

 

The trebles, on the drum kit used (mostly audible on the snare and the hh/cymbals), are perhaps a little too much exaggerated...

It lacks at least the fundamental attacks, like if you cut everything but the harmonics, it renders drums less "real", less present, ghost-like.

And of course, depending of one's headphone/speaker, this trebles (around 8-10Khz) can become really aggressive, as said earlier.

So IMHO at least you should listen your mix with different pairs of transducers / speakers, in different situations / places, so that you could have a better idea about what I'm talking about.

 

Added Airband and some other tweaks, Tell me what to do further. Thanks

 

I hear that you have applied correction globally, but it's not what i had in mind: have you the possibility to adjust each track individually?

If it is the case, perhaps you should work mainly on the drums, possibly replacing the drum kit used by another, with a more plain and warmer sound, but without touching to the other tracks!

If you apply a global correction, you affect the voice too, and IMHO the voice is perfect like it is and should not be touched in any way.

Of course it is only my subjective and dispensable opinion. Let's see what others think about this new mix!

EDIT: A thing i realize just now: the guitar solo around the end should need to be "warmified" too, it is a little too aggressive for my taste. When i record myself playing guitar, i use mainly valve amp simulators and vintage (retro) FX, like tape delays and / or spring reverbs, to keep all the warmth of the original instrument, and beautify the harmonics (valve amps adds even harmonics, whom is very pleasant to the ear).

 

Last edited: Oct 27, 2019

On this track I have only the mixdown stereo. So what you suggest is impossible at this stage. Sorry.