Here is a track that I finished in December... Any thoughts?...

http://soundcloud.com/boylearnsarcane/truly-this-is-the-end

 

I like it. How could I not with such a perfect title.
It's a really cool effect how the bass in the first half kinda goes slow-mo against the beat and the arps.

 

Thanks thisis theend, awesome username BTW. I also thought the half time beat over the bass in the first half was a cool effect.

Someone on another forum described my bass as "roaring"... does anyone else think I mixed it too loud?

 

Yeah the bass is loud and def the most prominent part, but I think it works here since it's not directly competing with any other element that might need a lot of space, like a vocal or some melody lead.