To all guitar & bass players please help...

Discussion in 'Guitars' started by spyfx, Mar 13, 2018.

  1. spyfx

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    To all guitar & bass players please help...:bow:

    So here are 32 bars of an idea i started working about an hour ago....

    I'm not a guitar player or a bass player.

    To guitar players : what do you think of the guitar strumming/chords ?

    To the bass players : what do you think of the bass line ?

    What are your thoughts/feelings/ideas ?

    What would you do different ?

    Would an electric guitar solo also work ?

    What are your suggestions ?

    Thanks in advance :wink: :bow::bow::bow: :

     
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  3. Ak3mi91

    Ak3mi91 Ultrasonic

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    When it comes to guitar, second halves of first two bars sound unnatural (especially in case of first one). I would slightly alter those.
     
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  4. metaller

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    Why not :metal:
     
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  5. vaiman

    vaiman Kapellmeister

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    I play guitar and it's a great tune man! Keep at it and post please
    Listening on a crap source at the moment so hard to comment on sound. Are the guitars panned left/right when it kicks in? Still sounds center on this.
    Yeah, slap a solo on that... tons of delay/reverb and huge bends all day!!!
     
  6. spyfx

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    thanks ! :wink::bow:

    the guitars have a delay on them....
    everything you hear in the track : guitar part,drums & bass it is all midi :bow:

    i will try but once again i have no clue on how to play the guitar :bow:,i'm a keyboard player/pianist :keys: :bow:

    thank you so much for sharing your thoughts :bow:
     
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  8. No Avenger

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    No cheap excuses, my friend :winker: :hug:, there are "millions" of keyboard players out there, who can play like a guitarist. But you will, for sure, have to know how this works and need some practise.
     
  9. spyfx

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    @No Avenger ! nice to see you back online man ! :wink:

    what i meant is that it is not a real acoustic guitar...it is all midi notes,that is why i'm asking....hope this makes sense :winker::wink::bow:
     
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    Well, ehm, sorry, but, yes, this was obvious to me.
    What I meant was, there are "millions" of keyboard players, who can play like a guitarists on their keyboard. The first time I recognized this was on Deep Purple's Live in Japan, where Jon Lord played the "rhythm guitar" on his B3 during the guitar solos.
     
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  11. spyfx

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    Right.....care to upload here an example of how you would play it ?
     
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    :hahaha: :like:,sorry, no chance.
     
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    I like it ))
    The beginning reminded me Dire Straits classic "Where do you think you're going?"
     
  14. midi-man

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    I am a guitar player and it sounds fine. You could use a lead guitar
    and maybe some variation.
     
  15. spyfx

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    thanks man ! :bow: ..... i just listened to Dire Straits - "Where do you think you're going?" & it is a Magical song :bow:,thanks for sharing :wink:

    thanks my friend ! :bow:,i really appreciate your time :wink::bow:


    To all members :bow: :

    version mk2 :
    i added a very basic & simple elec. guitar solo ( :deep_facepalm: ).....
    so apologies to all real guitar players here.....just having some fun in the studio....:winker::bow:

    i like it between 0:42-1:02....
    your thoughts of the mk2 version ? :

     
  16. midi-man

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    Would you like me to help / Assist you on a real guitar part?
    Not that yours is bad but a real guitar is a real guitar.
     
  17. spyfx

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    sure why not ? :wink::bow:,but give me a day or two,i'll pm you(when i have some time) if that is ok with you ,let me know...:bow:
     
  18. midi-man

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    Sure. I will do 2 tracks for you one electric guitar and and acoustic guitar lead only.
     
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  19. spyfx

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    :wink::bow::bow::bow: :guitarhero::metal:
     
  20. Herr Durr

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    @spyfx can tell you for sure.. @midi-man is a fine player... if you haven't heard some of his stuff... recommended

    don't think you will be disappointed..

    also nice track... will be even nicer when it's fleshed out... :yes:
     
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  21. spyfx

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    :wink::bow:

    :metal::guitarhero:


    @Herr Durr would you like to play on it too ? :invision: :metal::phunk:
    if not that is fine my good friend :wink::bow:
     
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