Yo Kanye, imma let you finish, but this is the greatest track of all time!

Above comment is a joke but I LOVE this in all seriousness.

Its a grungey, hip-hop instrumental. Work in progress.

Please comment honestly, good or bad. constructive crit wanted.
Thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/thepopenale/lava

 

you got alot of flavors jumpin off. i would love a thicker transient on the drums. could hear this on a movie. creative track homie!!

 

Cheers!

Can you elaborate about the drums? The low end of the drums (kick,sub,toms,whatever) have a ducking (sucking almost) groove which Im happy with. The other drum elements (hh, snare) arent quite gelled with the lower hits. I dont think I group bussed all the drums together with a buss comp at this stage, that would help.

Link me to something for a return crit if ya like.

Thanks again.