The Plan (Independence)

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  1. Recoil

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  3. Me2audio

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    Nice one, i just think the clock sound in the first part should be turn down a bit, and the tempo of the clock with the bass it´s not tight..
    Just my opinion :mates:
    Keep working :wink:
     
  4. bluerover

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    Sounds good! I agree about the clock comment. Don't put clock "right on" the beat, but maybe 15-20 ticks (no pun) sooner. After the intro clock, I want to feel the impact of the percussion blowing me away at 0:44. Focus the mix for total annihilation starting at 0:44.

    Otherwise, composition content sounds great!
     
  5. Recoil

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    For me this composition was hell :woot: I'm glad that someone liked it :shalom:

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    Good to see you using Samplitude!
     
  7. Recoil

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    slowly fadeout the clock sound and your good :D

    that 1-2 sec. that comes before you unleash the hounds could be improved. like ; "please hold my hand MORE before they come!" :D

    good job besides that. sounds like a great realm to visit!
     
  10. Recoil

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    @phloopy, @reliefsan this is composition for my new album, I have planned 6 more, but they are not ready yet :invision:
     
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