Ok, this is the first full mix of the patterns I sent BLA.

I sent him the raw patterns and he sent me pretty much this same thing back with a small arrangement example and I took it and busted up a full arrangement and that is this one.

Then he broke off two more mixes and finally the one he posted. Mainly I'm posting this so I can get some plays. lol


http://soundcloud.com/konspiracy-kitchen/the-konspiracy-kitchen-theme-m-lab-mix

 

The sounds you used are interesting. I won't gonna judge the quality of your mix as long as they're raw patterns (or i don't know exactly what you mean with that )
Anyway... I must admit that i consider the intro a bit too long, but if it was did on purpose, then i won't suggest you to change it.
Good Luck!