http://soundcloud.com/december103/the-brother-house

 

it sounds as if you already collected nearly all required ingredients that are waiting to be unleashed.
compared to the rest of the track the vocal parts sound a little overprocessed ... try to give the piano/acoustic guitar more character. try to put some variation on the chord progression/bassline.
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and add some offbeat hihat thing for the flow ... I feel like listening to the last two or three Infected Mushroom albums.
just kidding... keep up the good work!

where are you and the vocal samples from?

 

Thanks for the tips.
Problem with the lead is that it's the Tv show theme that I based the entire thing on, so I can't do variation on that... But i'll try to add some hihats

Vocals and me from Israel (just like Infected mushroom...)

 

The kick, bass, vocals are very Infected Mushroom.

I really dont like the synth fills starting at 2mins which continue into the chorus, thats just my taste, I find that tone a bit cheesy .

A little idea for you... When the distorted guitar comes in, at the end of 4/8 bar drop everything except the guitar and add a saw gate or triplet gate. Just an idea I think would be great for leading into a new section. Its just something I would do if it were my track.

I agree that a offbeat hihat would go well in the second half of each chorus at least.

Overall pretty nice, just a few issues like I already said, but then again this style isnt my favourite type of music.