My first composition since my computer died.

 

I forgot to write, that almost everything is played by the Independence sampler

 

Back in the saddle again!

The song sounds joyful-ish!

 

@Lois Lane I'm finally happy again, I don't drink alcohol, I don't smoke, so music production gives me the greatest joy

 

I had a lot of fun with this composition

 

It's a good song.
But work on what I'm saying to increase the impact of your music.
We listen to music because it deals with our emotions and causes different emotions to be aroused in us.
We have different emotions:
Anger
Disgust
Fear
Love
Anxiety
Calmness
Enjoyment
Joy
Pride
Sadness
Confusion
Shame
Happiness
Kindness
Amusement
Contentment
Disappointment
Envy
Affection
Boredom
Empathy
Relief
Surprise
etc.

See how you can embed these feelings in your music. For example, when a person listens to your song, the feeling of love will be stimulated and aroused, or when he listens to your song, the feeling of jealousy will be instilled in him. Music has the ability to create different emotions and you just have to find them.

 

I spend too much time on the forum, I'd better focus on what I like, which is music production. Cheers