TECHNO - Dissolution

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  1. Woask

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    Do you like it? Yes/No. Why? Thank you so much. Appreciate every comment

     
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  3. Gyro Gearloose

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    its great but maybe ad some mid to high freq counterpart to the bass shizzle
     
  4. Woask

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    Yes I will overwork the whole thing and purify it. Btw the feedback from a SSIO (or Jesus 2.0) fan is double important for me ;)
     
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    :winker::mad::grooves::grooves:
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    BTW dont hesitate to post more in future...usually you will get a lot more feedback here
     
  6. Bitmonkey

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    Pretty good - definitely needs more fx and 'ear candy' stuff to keep people engaged though stuff like subtle changes into breaks and the like to let the listener know something 'new' is happening. For example the drop at 1:40 just kinda happens as does the one later at 4:19. Listen to your favourtite techno and you'll see that's not usually the case there are filter/automation or other changes which happen before those.

    It (for me) also needs lots more layers of hihats and rides in places to build the energy and i'd be wanting some occasional toms/claps/white noise percs in there as well to add drive. You have pretty much only an offbeat hat/shaker thing in the whole track.

    Mixdown-wise the low end is a bit muddy as wellis everything properly sidechained off the kick?

    I also make techno on a few labels so DM me if you want any specific advice mate :)
     
  7. Woask

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    First of all thank you for your detailed feedback, I appreciate it. Yes the track isn't finished :D
    So I'll have to work on muddyness and a better arrangement. Check.
     
  8. What is your ultimate goal in making this music? Do you see yourself growing into other genres as you learn more about music? Is your focus on the music or how it will resonate with a crowd on a dance floor?
     
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    This song is great, all the pieces work and although the progression is minimal it's interesting enough to carry itself. The mix however is not presenting this song properly imo. Without adding new sounds I believe you can enhance the stereo image and sonic beefiness to really make this bang.
     
  10. Woask

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    My ultimate goal with this music is to make you happy. And my focus is to see YOU raving on the dancefloor or at least behind the monitor ;D
     
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