SUCK ! (my newest track)

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  1. Heels Machine

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    Hi !
    Here is my newest track called "SUCK" , need your opinion, criticism welcome !

     
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    I really like these delay-games-thing on the vocals. Nice synth sounds and nice idea with the cyms panning, too, although they lack a bit attack.
    What I noticed is a very/too quick build up beginning up to 1:28 and (too) slowly changing mainpart. This seems to me somewhat unbalanced.
    Especially that solo synth bar at 1:26 I would lenghten for two beats. I'm totally into that and it's really a small highlight.
     
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  4. Heels Machine

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    Yeah, the slow changing part is a problem, but it's been a year that I'm working on this track, and I lack objectivity...
     
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  5. Heels Machine

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    BTW what do you mean by unbalanced ?
     
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    Too short intro (too quickly changing parts) up to 1:26, too long or slowly changing/evolving mainpart (1:28 -fin)
     
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  7. Heels Machine

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    Ok thanks !
    Regarding the synths I used, here is the list of my setup :
    Roland cloud vst's
    Massive
    Yamaha DX7 MKI (1983)
     
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    Ha, the good old unprogrammable DX7. So, you're just using presets? [​IMG]
     
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    Easy to listen and it flows nicely .Great job
     
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  10. Tod Slaughter

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    Where's the snare at? I was expecting massive gated 80's snare. Everything else is there.
     
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    nice job!
     
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    the dx7 is fantastic
    my take on it, i think you should make the kick and snare punch a tad bit more punchy
    thats it great job

    fm synth rocks!
     
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  13. Heels Machine

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    Ahahahah yeah, good ol' preset from yamaha.
     
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    ? Sorry did not understand ?
     
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    Love it. You surely nail the feel and sound. If i could poinpoint it i'd say it falls somewhere between the darker 80's Italo dance tracks up to Front 242/Nitzer Ebb industrial sound all the way to KLF. This flows nicely man, got me grooving alright. Major Dig!
     
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  16. Heels Machine

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    Wow thanks a lot !!!

    I love Front 242 and Nitzer Ebb !
     
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    sounds really nice - great job
     
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    Nice, love it!
    Kept me interested the whole way through and even slapped it on again through the "big speakers" :winker:
     
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    Compare this gated snare with yours

     
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  20. Heels Machine

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    My snare is not gated, just heavily compressed and limited :)

    [​IMG]
    [​IMG]
     
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    Yeah I know...... I was expecting a huge snare is all
     
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