Short song on my new Soundcloud channel.

 

Your artist name means "swallow" in my language.

 

Sounds really good.You have the technical skills, though as a song its rather uninteresting, work on your song writing skills as well.

 

This sounds like a track geared for media, or commercial play. Or, are you just showcasing/testing some themes? You should arrange it into a full song.

* edit : Just saw your track is titled intro. that explains it.

 

I realized that afterwards after doing a bit research, not my brightest idea I agree, but I assure you that's not what I had in my mind when I finally figured my "artist name" out. I originally was going to use "Andy Vale", which is somewhat a poor translation to my real name, but then later on I decided to go with "AVALE" which is kind of an abbreviation of the whole thing I guess

To be honest it was never meant to be a full song and I actually first tried to put it on Audiojungle . This would have been my very first song in there. They decided to review it for 10 days and then just ignore it with no explanation, so I thought "fuck them" and decided to upload everything to Soundcloud instead. And now it's an "introduction song" to all my other songs that I hopefully finish in the future

 

It's the main and challenging point. Being technical is rather easier and more interesting than songwriting (everything fits together) for most people because it's like playing with tools. The real songwriting is a skill that is not being tutored much publicly. How many true songwriting courses can you name in our sister site or even youtube?

The Songwriting is like making the cock bigger that mostly pornstars know that well.

 

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Yea its hard, who ever said its easy? Song writing is a very, very personal process and its hard to put it out in a form of a seminar, because songs are basically stories.

 

Haha that was only for the joke my friend, dont be concerned about what your name means in whatever language, only important thing is how it sounds in english imo.

I liked your track though! Nice technical skills and good sounding, like VS said just need to tune musical theory/song writing/interesting arrangement and you're up for releases imo.