greetings! it will be lovely if you give 5 min of your time and listen my sound . i would be glad to (hear) comments and criticism

thanks in advance

 

I enjoyed the music.
I think mix has high frequency harshness.

 

Nice Atmospheric DnB. Makes me want to make a DnB track now....been a while

 

I don't listen to much DnB but this is pretty cool.

 

The chord progressions and the song sound good but the overall production and mixing is stale.

A bit like comparing these two pianos, you can instantly tell the flat lifeless one from the real thing.

 

Piano is super raw -» try different types of reverb and a bit of delay, otherwise pick a warmer piano instead...
Agressive hats (like Ankit) said -» A minimal high cut or even tape saturation...
Rest is ok... in my opinion...

 

thanks for the

thank you, yes it has high frequency harshness ,i was worried not to make it very bass(y)

 

thanks, i'm glad

 

thank s a bunch !

 

thank you , nice example, i had this feeling that my track is stale in a way,poor for some reason, cheers

 

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thank you , yeah i stuck with the same delay's and reverbs ,and the piano wasn't much warm,like hammer in some spaces . Willing for the next track to make some changes

 

thank you all
peace

 

If you can get anywhere near this you're gonna impress me a lot

 

hehehe... love that sound ,smooth, simple but so musically skilled ,a piece of art , my next target ... already flashes are coming
this music for some reason always cheers me up, I respect all the musicians involved in this kind of music

 

Just put a little life with reverb on piano and hihat and you are ready to go!btw nice song for walking in the street after rainy day!

 

yup !!! need a reset thanks very much

 

Nice Old School Jungle !

 

thanks for listening ! ur welcome

 

Usually, this isn't exactly the kind of music I enjoy but I found myself listening to the whole tune: Well done!

 

Good stuff, agree with tweaking piano and synth melody a bit more but overall high five. Easy listening D&B for yoga.
We could use more of this (as well as jungle) in society again.