I knocked these tracks together over the course of 2 weekends Mastering aint my speciality so any constructive criticism is welcome

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No comment about mastering here, only wanna say "Gagged" struck me damn hard...

 

thanks a lot dude

 

Me too - I like Gagged - nice sound - especially the drone background (reminded me a little of terminator 2 for some reason!)

 

thanks mate yeah i know what your sayin about terminator.

 

Maybe the vocals could be a bit louder and the 'strings' a bit lower.

Also, I always thought rappers should post their lyrics with their music..

I honestly cant understand a damn thing your saying.. and when u have a massage u want to get out.. doesn't bode well for it.

Overall, pretty good my man.

 

Cheers dude To be honest its not me rappin,its mt best mate,he just gave me the wavs of his vocals and i too have no clue what he is sayin ;)
the vocals when i got them were very thin and reedy sounding so they took a hell of a lot of beefing up anyone wanna remix them feel free to give me a shout ill let you have them,see what you can come up with.

 

Hey im so not into rappin dude but... what i hear is Circle of hate... i hear that song with some drive to it...Pumping and it would be kickin.... its got good speed ... ad some kickin one or two note bass that drives that song into where that hate is goin..I like the cords now... simple ... it will KICK... u can drive that into a money maker

Laters

 

Thanks a lot for that dude

 

Not sure which track i was supposed to listen to, so went for solice. As i was reading the comments i quickly switched to gagged. Glad i did as it was very good. Liked the intensity of it.

 

From the title of the post I thought it was going to be a recording of your ex or something...

 

LMAO

 

Gagged does the job

 

Thanks

 

my opinion as a listener...

I only listened to solice and gagged, on the first one, there is some sort of an annoying rumble (I reckon it may come from the reverb on your lowest tom)

on the other I find you pushed the high frequencies a bit too much...like you added too much "air" ...it's a bit tiring to listen to in the end...the song is good though!

the next song (I just listened to it a wee bit) doesnt have that problem...

....my 2 pennies' worth

 

cheers mate ,feedbacks much appreciated,mixing down and mastering is something i am working on, i havent really got the speakers for it to be honest its next on my to buy list

 

me i liked solice the most, i can hear what you were trying to do with the bass, but i think its need a little more work with the eq or something, maybe reduce the release time, or add some sidechain compressor to make it stand out a little more.