Someones hoping for some feedback

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  1. Someone

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    It's been a long time since I last logged on to AudioSex...

    I found this song I made like one and a half years ago, and I actually really thought it has potencial. It has a special vibe and is important to me, and I wondered how others might judge it. I know it needs some mixing... not to speak of mastering, but thats not important now.
    Anyways, even thought I havent been an active (or even passive) user on this forum lately, I hoped that some of you guys give me some of your thoughts and feedback for old times sake...

    Here's a link to the track:


    This is no promotion or a way of seeking for clicks. I dont even want attention, just some honest feedback :)
     
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  3. Oysters

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    This reminds me of '97-99, back when all was good and well. but with a twist. Maybe a little bit stompy for today's tastes, but that isn't really a complaint!
     
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  4. kouros

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    Sounds cool but I think it would sound even better if you had the bass following the harmony later on.
     
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  5. midi-man

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    Really cool track I like the Bass you have going one.
     
  6. mrpsanter

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    Sounds good, I like it!
    The first 30 seconds could be a lullaby that might help my kiddies get asleep...
     
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  7. Someone

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    Thanks man :)

    You mean like playing just the main synth as part of the intro before putting bass and beat in it?

    Thx :)

    :D Maybe I could give you a looped version for your kids ;)
     
  8. kouros

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    Changing the bass notes to follow the chord progression.
     
  9. Herr Durr

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    digging it... like the fat layered synth...and the chunky bass.. almost sounds like a polka rhythm in some spots
    ( not that it's bad or anything, but I get the stompy comment ) Overall a nice little piece, could maybe add a little airy part somewhere, as it seemed a bit short, left me wanting to hear more somehow.. and that can't be a bad thing
     
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