Hi, I'm regular visitor of audioz, so I finally decided to register to audiosex. I think that the best introduction is my music. Please tell me what you think. Thanks for the feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/caravanseizure/caravan-seizure-seduce-me-pt-2

http://soundcloud.com/caravanseizure/caravan-seizure-seduce-me

 

I listened with interest to this:

The second song reminds me somehow to 70's blaxploitation movies or something.

The arrangements are pretty 'minimal' but I guess that's on purpose. It didn't bother me.

 

I think you would profit to make it predictable just a little, it's taking too much for something to change and usually every time is late because the flow is somehow lost to me, good ideas you have here, interesting sounds and concept, but some urge is missing.

Try to automate things like reverb or delays, make some breakdowns, some fx's would be great, take parts and process them your could spice the things up a little

I feel good vibe but flow is just not right to me, like I'm stoned and don't know where I am

 

Manducator - You're right, it contains sample from Curtis mayfield song. Thank you for your opinion.

Xsze - I see what you think and I agree. I'll try. thank you for advices