Sharing a song: A Tash a Dal

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Sillytune, Oct 11, 2017.

  1. Sillytune

    Sillytune Noisemaker

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    Hey - as title says, sharing a song that i've recently made, exploring a lil' bit in this direction.

    Would love to get feedback & hope you guys enjoy
     
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  3. Recoil

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    Nice soundtrack.
     
  4. Sillytune

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    Thanks man!
     
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    Soft, yet strong, and beautiful.
     
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    On principle a nice track with interesting ideas and I like it but:
    You have guitars, strings, choir, a harp and all are struggling for attention at similar loudness.
    I would prefer a clearer seperation between the main and the background sounds.
    Some volume changes in the sustaining strings also called crescendo and decrescendo would do fine too.
     
  7. spyfx

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    @Sillytune hi my friend really nice,,i like the atmosphere of the track takes you into a world of its own,
    keep up the good work :wink:
     
  8. Sillytune

    Sillytune Noisemaker

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    Hey!

    Thank you very much for your constructive criticism, i didn't add any velocity change what so ever to the [strings] as you can hear, still new to it, just "exploring"
    Had a feeling that someone with bigger expertise would notice and point that out.

    Regardless i'll keep on trying - and do better next time.

    Thanks again!








     
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    The only way we all have.

    Maybe you discover non tremolo strings too. Imagine a real section playing tremolo on and on. They would suffer severe muscle ache and you would not want them to suffer from playing your music, would you?
     
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