SACCULUS _DOPE BOYZ

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  1. Sacculus

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    • Hi everybody!​
    • If you like modern style with Big BA$$ and tones of elements you can listen like and even share my last work​
    • It's call Dope Boyz!!!

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  3. Yellow Raven

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    intresting. just the too much chopped vocals is not its strong point.
    vive la france
     
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    Love it when the beat kicks in... The top line has got too much going on for my taste. Great work overall!
     
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    I like it. The excessively glitched vocal is quirky enough to lift the track above the cookie cutter EDM millieu. Most of all, I like the responses in the comments above. That little bit of friction is what I look for when I am sourcing music for a certain weekly radio show that I'm not going to mention here.

    @DELHOUM - if you have the time, please check out the PM that I'm sending to you.
     
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  6. Sacculus

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    Hi everybody!!
    Let me here what you think about this new POP !!
     
  7. The Pirate

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    @DELHOUM Nice track vro! I am not going to repeat what everyone has said about the glitched vocals in the first track. Just want to remind you that less is more. With that said, I want to point out that the song structure and arrangement need some work. The intro is way too long, and repetitive to warrant its length. By the time the track hits the 1:12 minute mark, the audience has lost interest in the track. Once in the main section, the arrangement is too repetitive to make it interesting enough. The elements are present but the arrangement does not tease the listener. Again, less is more. As a result, tension build up and release are absent. If you want an example of what I have explained, send me the stems.
     
  8. Sacculus

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    1. tha"s somz nice and usefull tips to be considered for the next work thanx! ... Im gonna try to learn a little more about tension and release but I think tension is made with added notes 9th . 11th. 13th . sus2. sus 4 ... and also I, I6, IM7, III-, III-7, VI-,VI-7 is stable and others especially the doninant 7 chord is instable...
    but there"s already a good documentation online and in my native tongue... I will give a shoot out!



    2. For the structure I try to use reference track that I feel good with the arrangement but in this day you are right the intro need to be sharp and interresting !!! Good point...

    >>> 3. For sure I will send u the steam im really curious and interrested to see what can be done from this starting point...

    ps : by the way is dropbox good , I mean is there security issues ?
     
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  9. The Pirate

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    I told you that the elements are in your track but you are not using them as you should. I asked you for the stems to show you exactly that. Work with everything you have in that track, do not add anything. To the contrary, subtract.

    And shorter!

    I use tthese 2 free services. WeTransfer will delete your files after 7 days. Never had a problem.

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    can u pm me your mail adress please?
     
  11. The Pirate

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    You need to check your PM
     
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