Hi All!

I made this track sometime ago... but I wasn't happy with the vocal melody.. So, forgot all about it... I recently revisited it and finally found a vocal melody I like... but now, I'm stuck for words... I just cant seem to write any decent lyrics for this song.

So, I hope to collaborate with you fine folk at AS... if you have a flair for words , please pm me and lets finish this track! The melody, lyrical meter and the notes are all in place and I have sung gibberish over them as placeholders... Of course, I'd like to keep the chorus refrain as it is (Run Back to You ... Time and Time Again...)

If you don't wish to collaborate, please gimme feedback on track anyway!

Hope someone does want to write to this!



Thank you!

 

Your love gave me pain i cry..
I am trying to figure why

I run back to you -i run back to you


Maybe this will help you a bit friend

 

Thank you @stoiximan ... That does help! Gets me thinking on those lines...

 

My way of thinking goes like this for your track.I had a lover but she hurt me bad,but even though she did that i always find my self thinking of her.I could try and finish the lyrics i gave you but i think it is better to give you a little push.But if you cant notify me and i will help more even though english is not my native language something always comes up when i here a good tune like yours.

 

I walk by the riverside
Reflectin' the city lights
I'm thinking of you, like I always do
I feel something stir inside
A longing that will not die
To be with you one more time
I walk in the dark, and old feelin's start
They take me back time and time again

I run back to you
And I make believe
I'm back in your arms
And you're loving me
I run back to you
Yeah, time and time again

If I could just turn back time
I wouldn't have made you cry
I'd give anything, to hold you again
I never knew you would leave
It happened so suddenly
You left me alone to grieve
But I can't let go, to live on my own
So I go back time and time again

 

Last edited: May 2, 2018

@stoiximan ... yes I fully agree with your line of thought... it never struck me to explore that emotion... I thank you deeply for this... and you can bet that I will certainly come to you asking for help with lyrics...

Will be in touch over private messaging...

 

Last edited: May 2, 2018

Woah! @Kirby ... that is frickin amazing! You wrote the entire song! Thank you sooo sooo much! You are ultra talented!!!

I will try to put this down on the melody and also try using some of @stoiximan ideas... I will be in touch with you on private messaging to take this forward...

Needless to say, all contributors get due credit and due payments if this song finds a paid outlet (I know its a long shot... but one never knows how things go... )

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

 

I want to punch you in the face. I want to make you cry.
I want to beat you down so much it makes you hope to die.
And when I leave you, on the floor, with nothing else to lose.
I'm gonna take a minute out before running back to you.

Running back to you. Time and again.
Run back to you. And start again.

 

^ this is excellent @Kinghtsurfer ,i would suggest you do a liquid drum & bass version of it,
imho it will give the track a new audience & perspective too
Have a great day !

 

@Spyfxmk2 ... thanks very much! I love your suggestion... though DNB is not really my style...

However, I'd be thrilled to bits if you made a Liquid DNB version... if you're ok with that and if you find the time... I could send you the stems once I finish recording the final version... That really would be a version to look forward to! Exciting!

 

Yes ^ but i want to spend more than an afternoon on it (not like my tracks lol ! ).....
so give me a lot of time
also i don't need the stems,i have a crazy idea , so just the track

 

Awesome!!! Take as much time as needed!

Will do... will send you track once complete... hopefully in 2 to 3 days...

Love it!!!

 

Any time mate i am here for you.I went to your sound cloud page and man that Melancholia track is superb,congrats!!!

 

Thank you humbly dear @stoiximan ... You are very kind...