PSylentum's first track [Harsh EBM/Industrial]

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by PSylentum, Jan 9, 2016.

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  1. PSylentum

    PSylentum Newbie

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    Hi guys, my first ever song, using Ableton.

    I would be grateful if you could listen and give me your opinion, thank you.



    Have a nice weekend.
     
    PSylentum, Jan 9, 2016
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  3. manducator

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    Hey,

    I think that the lead synths are too loud, especially between 0:55 and 1:20. It overpowers the drums/kick. And the kick is so important in this genre.

    The kick needs more low frequencies. Layering it with a 909 kick could be a solution. There's not enough goin on udner 80 Hz to make it a powrful kick.

    I liked the voices and screams, makes it haunting in a good way. Yeh speedup of tempo at the end adds to the suspension, great idea!
     
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