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Last edited: Dec 19, 2018

Still missing a part, probably. And its a rough mix.
Any mix and mastering cues are welcome

 

oh, and, its my first try at singing, so...indulgence on the vocals might be required

 

you need to work alot on your singing. i get what you trying to do, voice would fit perfectly if you singed it right.
take singing lessons maybe..? there is also lots of good stuff on yt to learn.
music was fine, a bit repetitive and the main lead sounded a bit like the music on keygen stuff but nothing that can't be fixed

 

haha
Got it

 

nice touch of the 80's

layer your voices until you get a bit of thickness, maybe ( no backing or phasing, just one on top of another ) and until you get the melody right.
it sounds a bit like depeche mode, to me, so you don't need to be a good singer to achieve what I think you want to.
EQ your voices, less low end, a bit of reverb on a aux..
the mix needs more dynamics ( at least volume and panning ).

it's good you take the risk of singing, not many people do this, but to me, it's the best school to learn structure and not to get lost into a never-ending experimental creativity.

also great that you're writing lyrics

keep going, good luck

 

Thanks !

I agree. I never really wanted to sing, just got sick of being in bands and dealing with the singer ego ;) Its more about creating a song. And, indeed, its not about "performance", although, I'll work to get it closer to sounding right.

And, yeah, big fan of joy division, Depeche Mode, Fad gadget, bauhaus...

 

Definity should be mastered would glue all togther just right as far as vocals go i cant really sing I either comp a tone of takes or just use auto tune then if i can have someone else sing it I do. I like the direction tho just a thought maybe lower vocals by 1db seem a bit louder then all else might be my speakers tho.

 

Thanx!
yeah, I'll probably re do many takes and flex pitch on logic to tweak what is too off.