Please, I need a feedback on my track - Funky heavy techno :)

Discussion in 'Electronic' started by Cossinelle, Jun 26, 2017.

  1. Cossinelle

    Cossinelle Noisemaker

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    Hi, After a few years trying to create music I've finally finished a track ! Please, could some of you listen to it and give me advices or feedback ?

    It's a kind of heavy funky techno track :



    Thank's a lot :)
     
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  3. korte1975

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    huhh. first my thought was that its shite, than listened more and more , not in one go but parts-jumping. its brilliant in a way ! well done.

    write more !
     
  4. beatmagnus

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    Super clean minimal tek, hi five:)
     
  5. virusg

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    i would have loved some accentuated percusions here and there but thats a nice track overall, i like it ...dont dare to change nothing, it has its originality

    7.8/10 :like:

    PS: you have some great mixes, do you have playlist? where can i find the tracks for a buy?
     
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  6. Blazin

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    it's cool. I have a bad habit of not finishing things I start. I need to be more disciplined
     
  7. beatmagnus

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    There are few things that can be this simple and yet so unique. I feel like OP might be from LA with this style?
     
  8. Montgent

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    As a death metal guitarist that plays funky jazz, this is a little bit funky. Not heavy at all. But it is all good, I really like it. Great effort Cossinelle. I like them plucks and the bass.
     
  9. beatmagnus

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    For those that don't know, EDM is a bit different in US. On west coast minimal tech house is pretty popular which is where my spider senses are telling me this is coming from. Its always been a bit tough for me to get into but this particular track is purdy groovy. Oops, I just looked at op's soundcloud and it says Paris France, I'm surprised:)
     
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  10. howzit

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    Sounds like a funky R2-D2 is destroying my kitchen. Get down!
     
  11. Cossinelle

    Cossinelle Noisemaker

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    Hi Guys, thank you so much for your comments, they realy encourage me !

    @Montgent : Seeing your avatar I think that we have the same tastes, I'me going to see (hear !) Herbie Hancock next thursday !... :beg:...and I've also been playing death metal on the guitar some years ago :metal:

    Thank's a lot for the comment but unfortunatly I've made all those mixes years ago and I didn't write any playlist... I'd have to dig realy deep to find all the titles and I don't have much time to do this at the moment, I'me working and have two young children if you know what I mean. I can just tell you that the titles from most mixes are from around 2005/2010 except for Cospeedtek whose titles are all from the 90's... vintage techno ! :) But if you're patient, I'll try to manage that during the holidays.

    @beatmagnus : héhé, yes, I'me from Paris but I have to admit I don't listen to much french music... and anyway, I don't listen to much electronic music anymore, I'me mostly on jazz (from the 60's, 70's), funk, good dico, eventually good pop, and rock, wich makes quite a lot of good (non french) music to listen to !
     
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    i fell you man, i have 2yrs old boy ...music is kind of a second ...and yes please, would like to have some names from those, thank you!
     
  13. maximoman

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    That's a wicked track dude, absolutely bonkers! I love it. Awesome production, nice wonky rhythms. Gotta ask you about your bass sound, how did you process it? It's pretty wide and fills out the spectrum nicely, is there a short reverb or some amp/speaker simulation going on?

    And seriously, you got something special happening there, nice work. Keep it up!
     
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    I'm not a big Techno fan but this track kicks up the dirt!
    I must say it is very well produced and put together. Very original. I really like it, it has a groove that is pretty irresistible.
    Well done!
     
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    This is the killer minimal tech track from before!!!! If my memory serves correct, this version has wider/compressed more bass, maybe faster bpm?, more bass spurt noizes with a neat bass panarama, seems there was a vocal sample in there before from a train-station or something that I'm kind of missing now? I think there is something about the feel that is a bit different rhythmically because I remembered some off rhythm elements? I could be wrong. I might like a slower bpm with the off rhythm stuff a bit more but It was nice to hear this one again:mates:
     
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    For those that don't know, EDM is a bit different in US. On west coast minimal tech house is pretty popular which is where my spider senses are telling me this is coming from. Its always been a bit tough for me to get into but this particular track is purdy groovy. Oops, I just looked at op's soundcloud and it says Paris France, I'm surprised
     
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    Really good man. No at all boring at any point and always keeps me engaged. Haven't heard this kind of music anywhere.Do more .:wink:
     
  18. farao

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    The music is really great. Enjoyed it a lot.
     
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    Great bro :wink:
     
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