Please comment on my revised track

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  1. CSider

    CSider Newbie

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    So after advice from others heres s revised version of my last tune

    Free download

    http://soundcloud.com/c-sider/csider-sweet-harmony-2nd-mix

    Hope you enjoy and comment
     
    CSider, Sep 21, 2013
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  3. olson

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    great track - no critics
     
    olson, Sep 21, 2013
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  4. geraldthegenius

    geraldthegenius Noisemaker

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    Love it! A world difference from your previous. All the sounds are introduced with great subtlety! Chaining is nice. The chaining really brings out the hats on the up beat. Has a cool pump to it now especially during the thick of the tune. I even went back a bit once it ended to to hear that hihat cadence one more time lol. Nicely done.
     
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  5. Catalyst

    Catalyst Audiosexual

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    Great track. I look forward to hearing more from you. :mates:
     
    Catalyst, Sep 22, 2013
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  6. chopin4525

    chopin4525 Producer

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    This is the first time I hear a good, unsquashed piano sound in this kind of tracks. :rofl:
    My hat is off. :wink:
     
    chopin4525, Sep 22, 2013
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  7. CSider

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    Hey guys, thanks very much for the great comments.
     
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  8. thepopenale

    thepopenale Noisemaker

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    This is mixed beautifully. MAYBE the hihats are a touch loud but other than that the whole track gels together organically.

    Love the piano, love the vocals.

    Im sure I commented on this before. Great work :wink:
     
    thepopenale, Sep 24, 2013
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