Something Ive been working on, forgot about, worked on, got distracted etc. but finally the end is near.
Not quite 100% yet, few things Im not happy with.

Anyway its an atmospheric, spacey, trippy track. Evokes the image of an old German mansion for me, dunno why!
pope on production, rolma on vocals.

ENJOY! And please give feedback and constructive criticism.
Cheers

EDIT: Track is locked, because I wanna get "thumbs up" from Rolma before I unlock it, hence the player doest work. Go to soundcloud to listen. Thanks

http://soundcloud.com/thepopenale/phantom-the-third-ft-rolma/s-BtS5l

 

surprised!

 

RE: Soundcloud comment. I always intended a washy, dreamy kinda style for this. I can export the .wav of the instrumental and send it to you? Would be good to see your take on things too?

 

Great idea....pls link it
I´ll take a look on that..time to produce vocals a bit!

 

Okay.

Pub tonight so be patient!

 

Weekend off here ...so enjoy the Sunday roast!,)

 

Nice to see a collab on this board!

The track is too long because of the same basspatern. Waited too long for the voice. So you could use some different FX at the beginning or just make a shorter intro.

that synth melody starting at 41 sec., if you play this at the beginning, it's like you give away the whole song already. If you let this start around 2:34, maybe it suits better.

The snare is in some parts too soft. And some rhythm in hihats should be nice. Or not, for just a laidback feel.