Hey everyone, been producing for 2 years now just looking for some exposure. Don't be afraid to critique my work and help me fine tune things. I'm here to grow, not to hate or bash people.

Check out this thread regularly to hear my near music.

 

Last edited: Oct 1, 2016

need critiquing on my "explode" beat

 

Like it!

 

listen to it 3 times, very interesting track.
It does leaves a feeling behind something could/should be added to pull in the listener attention a little more.

this can be done in several ways, and most likely be very influenced by taste.
Bbut still, what I would do, is use an auto-panner on the Hi-Hat, make it "hard" pan from full left too full right
then put a light-ping-pong delay on top of that ( to kinda reverse the "hard" part)

so after adding a little more movement, I would add some more fx, risers and sweeps.
and some kind of kill-bill/alarm/siren/hit/crash sound-likes on some downbeats.

 

Last edited: Sep 16, 2016

+1, Tracks sound good, you know how to build 'em, but I'd like to see (hear) more going on, like @Kwissbeats points out.
I'd even play with different rhythms and measures.

 

Thank you everybody! This is exactly what I was looking for! I'm still trying to get better at progressing a song all the way through.

 

added a new track "wavey"