Howdy all?

Here's the second demo of a track i've been working on of late

It's about cctv surveillance and new laws being brought in under the guise of protecting the general public from paedophiles & terrorists

As always, let me know what you think, good or bad

Thanks

Youtube Link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=irEN4gCux3g&feature=youtu.be

 

It's such a mess I had to check (pause/play) if another song was playing.

 

Nice. REminds me of Iggy Pop. The voice. Could use more whiskey and cigarettes. lol

Where is the compression? Where is the equalizing stuff and such? You can hear it the best when the guitarsolo starts. So the basskick has a freq, the bass, snare and shit. Make sure the snare dont use same freq. as basskick and vice versa. Compression on kick or whole drums should be nice.

I dont have the idea that are too songs are playing. Like the bassloop, nice one. Dont like the drummer who is using the crash wayyyyy too much. Most drummers do imho.

Like the organ, the vocal harmony at the end. Really, reminds me of end 60's sound.

Oh the lyrics. Like it. Government wants to control the people. Instead of government is made by people for the people. Changes are coming bro'