Hello guys, it's me again .
What do you think about this track ? I tried to took some advices from previous thread. Any advices to make this track even better ?
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Thank you

 

New version, tried to master it :D - http://www.mediafire.com/listen/xyekcagdu0nu2c9/orchestral+2+master.mp3

EDIT: And now when I listen it back I think, that mix sounds way better than master.. :D.

 

Don't know if anybody care, but here is final version

http://soundcloud.com/syntey/battle-of-drones

 

It's great as far as mixing, instruments, sounds etc. It's just the melody that's bothering me a little bit.

In the beginning part, the "bass" never changes and makes the melody a bit uninteresting. The bass is basically one note. Just changing up to a 4chord progression would do wonders I think.

But great job overall, the mix is clean as hell.

PS: Also, you could add choirs in that last part