Avez-vous des idées sur ce que je peux améliorer ?

 

No, I do not think that anyone can make anything better here anymore.

 

Why??

 

too much reverb for my taste

 

Sounds good. The riff sounds great. I'm a beginner with mixing so others here can tell you better.
To me it sounds like it has too much reverb. Also some eq to be done. Some sounds overshadow the guitar.

Don't mind him, he's a sore soul

 

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I like the arrangement, quite effective. Just add a limiter to push few db more and it's done.

 

Yeah, I must concur, good riff but no low end (is there even a bass guitar in there?) and the whole thing sounds like a band sound checking at a big empty arena while you're outside.

 

J'ai donc utilisé la réverbération uniquement sur la caisse claire.
À la guitare, j'ai appliqué le chorus, ce qui explique peut-être pourquoi on a l'impression qu'il y a beaucoup de révérence.
C'est un choix artistique concernant les effets

 

Bass vi for rhythm guitar and true bass

 

I put Ozone 11 on the master, and a limiter, should I increase it?

 

chorus effect on rythm guitars? not a good idea.

 

At the end of the day, if you like the way it sounds then go for it. I was never really a fan of the production of, say, the Cocteau Twins; to my ears that was "wrong" but a lot of people love it. We're just giving you opinions based on our interpretation of what would be typical for that genre.

 

Type O Negativ ??

 

I was asking for an opinion on the mix, not on the artistic direction.

 

Def too much reverb. Sounds like the drums are played in a cave. Muddies the guitar a bit. Almost feels like there's a phaser going on.

But remember if it sounds good to you, go for it!

And if you're gonna add vocals over, it's gonna change the mix of course, would be interesting.

 

You're asking for opinions but I think what you really want is affirmation. I've tried to be diplomatic... anyway, good luck.

 

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