Opinion needed

Discussion in 'Work in Process' started by Elnur Magerramov, Nov 18, 2019.

  1. Elnur Magerramov

    Elnur Magerramov Kapellmeister

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    Hello guys, how are you? Hope you are all doing good.

    Need your feedback about that track. There is a little story behind it, that's why I want it to be perfect.

    And asking opinions because the track was produced and mixed with little iPhone earphones, on and old macbook pro, in a hospital.

    Also I plan to add the singer on it, so would appreciate a feedback, since I don`t even have an opportunity to listen on a decent gear, cause I`m still in a hospital :D so I`ll trust your ears :)

     
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  3. KungPaoFist

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    Really liking this:speaker:

    I think the composition is great, the mix sounds a bit lopsided and could use some body/low end though.
     
  4. garfinkle

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    Some pretty serious pumping going on there. Id be a little more selective in your sidechaining. Kick/tamb a little too present.
    I'd suggest muting all compression and getting the balance right.
     
  5. ryck

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    Hey, bro. I hope you are well and recover soon from what is happening to you. Like the others, I think it's a very nice song. It sounds like a song of hope (at least that's what I got from it). I have some edifer speakers and some sony mdr . But I'll give you my opinion anyway. I think the same as the others. In principle I feel that there is an over-comprehension, as if the kick of the bass drum for a few moments pulls back the mix. And if it also seems to me that there is a lack of body. Like they told you to work on a bass, or on the bass of your sound. But the song is very nice I congratulate you
     
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    I think it sounds great! mixed well, with small areas of improvement, it has hope within it, and the track doesn't feel so complex or over-done to ruin the story it is trying to tell. I can empathize with your situation, def keep fighting!
     
  7. Elnur Magerramov

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    Thank you everyone. Actually, I wanted to call that track Hope or something in this field :)

    Thanks for your opinions about the issues with low end, because I have no low end at all in my earphones, and ozone suggested me to even cut a little from low end, around -3dbs :D I also think that the kick is too loud.

    Thank you very much, I'll keep working on it, and hopefully will be able to post new version with vocals very soon.
     
  8. Rorer

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    That sucks.
    You start off well, and then you clean the kick.
    Too Thin that mixing. I miss the Bass
    And don't use compressor on master bus.
    Song is ok, but too much cutting the low frequency's.
    You got problem with your neighbours :P
    https://www.youtube.com/user/mixbustv/videos
     
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    Sub ‍:dunno:
     
  10. DoubleTake

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    To me it is very "light", which is nice for background music.
    Listening while playing muted Rocket League.
    Made me not rage at the noobs :)
    Of course a vocal on top of this could change everything, as it often does.
    After vocals, then see where it needs some power...

    Son-of-a-bitch ... it is too "catchy" as well. ba-da bee-da-da bee-da, ba-da dee-da dee-da-da...
    I am going through the rhythmic variations in my head.
     
  11. Matt777

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    1. Get well! Stay well!!

    2. Turn up the bass! ;)
     
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