New track, looking for feedback

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by atmos1, Feb 11, 2016.

  1. atmos1

    atmos1 Ultrasonic

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    Hi all! I just finished and uploaded my new track. Care to listen and share your thoughts?
    Cheers!

     
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  3. notremid

    notremid Producer

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    Nice composition. Can't comment on mixing as I am listening through some cheap earphones.
     
  4. jiggletiggles

    jiggletiggles Newbie

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    BASS needs to find it's own space. it's filling in all around everything else like wax. you might want to add some clean distortion to create a harmonic that can be heard higher up so that the bass doesn't have to be up so much. for stuff like this i will stick a mic in my room and record the bass LOUD AS FUCK through my monitors and then lay it in the background. It adds a sense of space. but this can also lead to crazy strange peak frequencies i will then surgically remove because untreated rooms do that.
     
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    atmos1 Ultrasonic

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    LOL I thought it was giving a sense of deepness... I will need to check that bass :)
     
  6. One Reason

    One Reason Audiosexual

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    One of the few tracks posted recently Ive actually finished... I liked.:chilling:

    a lil bass heavy but hey.. I caught a 12lb bass years ago on my very last piece of bait..

    ..didnt have a problem with that either!

    Nice one. :thumbsup:
     
  7. thegerman1220

    thegerman1220 Member

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    I like it. Agreed with the bass hitting a little too hard....

    I enjoyed the little acoustic / percussive "dirt" that's all over the track. You've done a good job of giving your track direction, but keeping it random enough to where it keeps the listener guessing.

    keep it up!
     
  8. lexeed

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    Sounds great to me. Excellent trk.
     
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  9. cc.gwaan

    cc.gwaan Noisemaker

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    musical wwise its good! but it seems the bass is too heavy and occupied a lot of space in the mix!
     
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  10. atmos1

    atmos1 Ultrasonic

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    Thanks all, I appreciate your time, kind words and advice.
     
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