New track... happy to hear your input

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  1. atmos1

    atmos1 Ultrasonic

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    Edit: New versión up. Let me know what you think ... again.
    Do not forget to change to HD video...

    This is my new track. I am looking for your input. I didn't want to make it longer since I wanted to make it easy to digest to edm impaired people. I jumped out of soundcloud, it does not make sense to me anymore. I found out that making videos are fun. Please dismiss the cheesy video LOL
    Thanks in advance!
     
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  3. TruBlood

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    What is this mastered at -32 db :)
     
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    Hmmm it didn't seem to low... then again, I am always concerned by dynamics ...
     
  5. dbmuzik

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    Needs to be louder of course, and more dynamic space. Right now it's like a midget bouncing a ball.
     
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  6. Herr Durr

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    very nice generally.. does need some volume and punch...
     
  7. atmos1

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    LOL
    Thanks guys... I will check it out
     
  8. modelarmy

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    Wait for Mr. Gahan starts singing:wink:
     
  9. TruBlood

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    Not trying to sound rude here but it's not the dynamics or volume that is the culprit it is the composer's ear that is betraying him.
     
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    LOL not at all, and you guys are right... I did mix without monitor speakers... I used consumer grade speakers (bose) those tend to lie to you... so much that it was until this morning I had the chamce to listen in my car, and yeah, you guys are right.I guess that when one is composing, you know every bit of your song, and it is easy to listen every note... that is why is good to listen in a variety of speakers... but I didn't ... I promise I will in the future... Thanks!
    Edit: I better get some monitors and a good reference file LOL!
    LOL I love DM, so I will take it as a compliment... though never intended to sound line them... thanks mate!
     
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  11. subGENRE

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    Cool tune, need to fix it though.
    Mixing on bose? No, just no. Those are tuned plastic boxes with paper cones and itty bitty magnets. Way too expensive and they all resonate like a mofo in the mid/bass range. All hype and marketing. You could get a better mix on some decent headphones.
     
  12. atmos1

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    New versión up, check the OP ...
     
  13. modelarmy

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    It was a compliment. Really this it was i thought.
     
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    Man, your are sooooo kind. Cheers!
     
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    Sounds fun. I was kind of thinking of that Autobahn song by Kraftwork when I listened to this.
     
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    Thanks for listening! I wonder why. I admit that I really don't know kraftwerk's work apart of one or two songs. Slowly walk away to open spotify to educate myself... cheers! :like:
     
  17. The Teknomage

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    I would put this more under Synthwave than EDM. Nice track though. Most people always think of Kraftwerk, when they hear this lighter style. I like to make the darker style, so mine tends to make people think of Gary Numan.:rofl:
     
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    Ha thanks! You bring an important topic. I have always wondered about where do my music fits in all this electronic genre mess? Not that it has stopped me to continue, but you know, there was an itching deep inside myself asking that question. Just saying electronica was not enough. EDM well, I felt it was vage. Once I went to look for electronic music classification. I found a huge list that made my head spin... there were too much, so much that I just threw that idea away. But then again, one need at least know what is that that is doing. I mean, now I can say "synthwave, it is called synthwave" whenever someone ask. Thanks!
     
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