I quite liked the last 60s of build-up tension - would've been good as a standalone track. The first minute sounded quite disconnected and disjointed; too separated. I think it's because of all the big percussive hits early on? Also low strings seemed out of place there. I kinda want a twinkly, pared-back, swirly intro and gradual contrast in the build up to a massive cresc.

 

Really cinematic composition straight from Hollywood nicely done