New Track For Critique

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by KungPaoFist, Oct 2, 2019.

  1. famouslut

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    I quite liked the last 60s of build-up tension - would've been good as a standalone track. The first minute sounded quite disconnected and disjointed; too separated. I think it's because of all the big percussive hits early on? Also low strings seemed out of place there. I kinda want a twinkly, pared-back, swirly intro and gradual contrast in the build up to a massive cresc.
     
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  2. Recoil

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    Really cinematic composition straight from Hollywood :cheers: nicely done :hifive:
     
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