New Track For Critique

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  1. KungPaoFist

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    Hey all, Here is a new one that I was hoping to get some feedback on if anything comes to mind, hopefully its as enjoyable to hear as it was to make:)


    I'm noticing a hiss last minute which will be removed shortly:dunno:
    Thank you:bow:
     
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  3. No Avenger

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    That depends heavily on the fun you had. [​IMG]

    Nice soundtrack, good work, me likes.
     
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  4. reliefsan

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    alternative feedback?

    the balance is "there" at the end, but it could need to more attention thruout to keep it "consistent" (each element)

    At first, i thought the percusion/rhytem tracks where too loud and the choire and other parts where too low in the mix, but it made sence at the climax.

    now you need to massage volumes to the flow and make them follow the intention.

    if you feel like more adventures,
    add more highstring actions towards the end, cresendos or legato, both will work im feeling

    But good job sofar man!
    alot better than previous works, since this seems more "clear in vision/intent" :)
    i like it!
     
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  5. electriclash

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    :like::like:


    that aside is good work! Now the next part.. dialing it all in @KungPaoFist :wink:
    personally a midi mixing board allowed for tactile automations which made developing the flow much more... instinctive? Nice one man :D

    edit: I walk away, I'm still singing it NIIICE
     
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  6. KungPaoFist

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    Thanks so much for the feedback so far everyone!

    Yes, I'm realizing now the importance of such things as leveling to keep the flow... Thanks for the useful tips:mates:

    :invision:, mind blown :cheers:
     
  7. This is my suggestion:

    Leave out peculiar experimentations with sounds and try to study hard. Very hard to know what's what.
     
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  8. electriclash

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    well see thats fuckin nonsense and not constructive at all
     
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    Every creative person who plays synths does it, more or less, you just have to.

    Besides, I can't hear those in his track.
     
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  10. It's constructive. Music must have many aspects. Formlessly-blending-of-sounds-and-applying-some-processes-and-hoping-that-something-comes-out division of history has already come to the end in the 20th century without reaching any notable fruition and no need to reiterate it.
     
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    You are not very experienced when it comes to soundtracks, right?
     
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    its not. you spout nonsense. Spare this composer your deep, deep BS

    *seriously, look at that spout of noise you just polluted this thread with ugh
    [​IMG]
     
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  13. Soundtrack is usually being laid at the end of the gamut of the orchestral-instruments' usage and gimcrack.
     
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    its nice soundtrack for tv or for game ,short but sweet use of orchestra there ,
    thumbs up from me :wink:
     
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    well idk much about formlessly blending of sounds and all, but I thought it sounded dope. Kinda sounds like a batman movie. I can't tell if it's just me or the percussive sounds could maybe use just taking a touch off the highs and putting it into the low end punch. Like maybe a 1-2 dB off the top with a tilt eq
     
  16. KungPaoFist

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    We should all strive for something greater then we are. I will meditate on this, btw what is your musical style? Unless you are indeed the, ..Foster, in which case I've been a long time fan:bow:
     
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    honestly, dont hold your breath. - he doesnt even talk about your music. he is selfabsorb in his owne world, and trying to project that illusion onto others everytime.
    i beat this is only his sideproject. his real project in on twitter farming money from SJW's that he triggers all day :)
     
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    wow, I liked the dynamics of the track going from very quiet to loud towards the end... I like those kinds of buildups... keep it up!
     
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    love it, it's very good what you produced, continue in your quest!
     
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    I just measured it. The track has a gap at ~ 65Hz and a spike at ~ 12,5kHz. Besides these it looks ok.
    So, two small bell eqs should fix these but I wouldn't tilt it.
     
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    It´s screaming "Lights, Camera, Action"
     
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