As the title says..some general feedback on my new track wouldnt be bad! thanks for your time

 

Sounds great, nice face.

 

nice track but I think for this genre, needs more bass. Listened on ATH M50 and Yamaha HS8

 

I like it, some great sounds in there and in general a good tune. The synth runs are cool.
I feel it could do with something else in the part where the vocal chop is? Not sure, it just feels like its almost there but just lacking in being a great tune?

 

Thanks for the replies guys:D about the lacking bass..i made the track completely with a pair of philips--and the bass is pretty present in my headphones..wish i could use better ones but atm i dont have any money to get some profi ones..anyway still hope you guys enjoyed litlle bit..thanks once again

 

indeed..not my face btw) just some hippy looking girl to attract wiewers lel

 

not bad, maybe you give the mix a little bit more room/space and then add
some vocals

 

thanks about the synths..thats hive (the vst) glad you liked it..and dont know ill try to see what can i change to make it better

 

Well produced but so nearly something new, but then again not. Dig deeper m8 your onto something big!

 

^This. Just echoing @Tim
The track grabbed my attention from the get-go. Kinda faded towards the end but, overall, it's a keeper. Tempting to think that remastering in order to pull up the subs would be cool. Nonetheless, you can go further than this.

At the moment, it's like you're on your last gasp just fifty metres from the finish line. Push it, bro. Go for that gold. Finish with all of your tanks empty. Extending the length of the piece and feeding in the ghost of a melody, no matter how simple, might possibly be the antidote to brain fade.