New track draft ...

Discussion in 'Work in Process' started by JTSD, Sep 19, 2021.

  1. JTSD

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    Comments appreciated

     
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  3. BEAT16

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    I am enthusiastic rarely heard something so beautiful, emotional.
    Really a great song. A mix engineer could turn the song into a hit.

    The end of the song comes a little too abruptly, you might find a solution for that.
     
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  4. Stuck In The 80s

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    It's got something about it.
    My only comment is that there isn't enough distinction between your A and B sections. That brass synth lead line and the main drumloop just carries on throughout apart from the sudden break in the middle of the track. You have structured it like a pop track but it's missing a chorus. It's like you have verse 1, verse 2 then back to verse 1 again.
     
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