Comments appreciated

 

I am enthusiastic rarely heard something so beautiful, emotional.
Really a great song. A mix engineer could turn the song into a hit.

The end of the song comes a little too abruptly, you might find a solution for that.

 

Last edited: Sep 23, 2021

It's got something about it.
My only comment is that there isn't enough distinction between your A and B sections. That brass synth lead line and the main drumloop just carries on throughout apart from the sudden break in the middle of the track. You have structured it like a pop track but it's missing a chorus. It's like you have verse 1, verse 2 then back to verse 1 again.

 

Very talented - hit suspect.
https://soundcloud.com/jcg-7