hey guys made a new trance song to me it sounds like im listen to it through a can of baked beans, any way let know what you guys think

http://soundcloud.com/randomtazk/random-tazk-nek-original-mix

 

I will put my thoughts as i'm hearing the song, so it will be in a timeline.

Nice trick with this filtered kick at the beginning, creates a good vibe. Nice build up, but the bass at the drop is kinda weird, he lacks of power. Nice synths! The bass in the second part gets better! Cool fill! Nice FX! Nice drop after the second build up, but the kick seems to be lacking a little bit of power, but it's really nice this drop!! Awesome breakdown, adds a lot of expectation! nice synths after the breakdown, really liked it! Awesome build up! The drop could be stronger, just don't know how... Last drop is really great.

Well, the entire song seems very well mixed, it's pretty good! But is missing low end to give an epic power to your song, i guess it's because of the kick that it's not strong enough for the song... But it's a really great song dude, nice job!

Could you give some feedback on my song?

http://audiosex.pro/index.php?/topic/14055-progressive-house-really-trying-to-get-better-at-mixing/