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Down tempo sorta sound i guess *yes*

 

I feel something missing maybe a groovy melody, right now it sound safe!!! C'Mon take the Risk lol, anyhow it got my heading bumping in a left to right fashion

Also remove the s from https: to http: to embed the link

 

There is a little bit of a melody under the top line, its a little hard to hear but thanks for the feedback guru
I think you're right though, Should be a little more risky and go for something new

 

nice track i like it!
but , i think need more percs and put the melo in front, the track will be better!!!
humble oppinion my friend!

 

when the beat comes up i love the repetive-sidechained-one-chord/tone in the background

fist thing that made me interested were the hard-shuffled-synth-plucks (plugs??? auf wiedersehen english )

honestly i'm clicking a bit through the track, but i heard, that at the end there is a part where the bass became more picky and shorter
through only clicking i dont know, but this element should definitely should have its place in the whole track
changing between those long notes and short notes (just a little bit - to recatch the attention)

.... clicking ... clicking ... clicking ....

ok at the beginning there it is too, but i ment some singular notes in the middle-main-part to make it more fresh and less sleepy :PPP

soundscape from 1:14 to 1:30 really is nice - i guess i would have brought that again later in the track ontop of the beat and bass
its the same melody of the plugy-trance-synthie i guess - its just calmer -
just an idea - just going through some options :PP


solid production - good job!