New track, hope u can enjoy it!!!!

https://soundcloud.com/bergermartin/manu-f-never-see-martin-berger

 

Not my style but I could imagine people who are into this sound would love it. Not bad at all.

 

ty catnap
much appreciated!!!!

 

Can I be honest with you? It's a good track but I feel like it needs more melodic development. The track just kind of plods along and your arrangement could use a little work. I think you need more contrasting material for such a long track, more variety to maintain interest. Just my humble opinion given in the hopes that maybe it could help you improve. I think it could really take your track to the next level.

 

ty for ur advice, i appreciate a lot
of course i can try to go to the next level i will put more work in my melody *yes*
Greetings!