new psytrance track

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by randomtask, May 8, 2016.

  1. randomtask

    randomtask Ultrasonic

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    Hello everyone,

    just finished my new track let me know what you think :wink:

     
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  3. oa.

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    first of all, i liked your sound exempt synth starting at 1.10. it's much harder for your progressive psytrance song. (i think)

    spoken is really fluent.

    i'm in love with 5.00 and continuation.. congratulations.

    i can't talk about mix and mastering because i'm in my office and listening with iphone headphones :)
     
  4. SaeureTrinker

    SaeureTrinker Kapellmeister

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    Hey randomtask! Nice one, man!
    I like it a lot from the beginning until minute 2, great job!
    Then the next part (minute 2 -4) is a litle bit boring (but hey, thats just my opinion :wink: ).
    But at minute 4 i smile again! I like it a lot! :wink:

    Continue like this!!
    Greetings
     
  5. jim26

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    Really cool track! :like::yes:
     
  6. The Iceman

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    Great job man I love Psytrance! Only suggestion and it could be my room, but the bass could cut thru the mix just a little bit more. Really liked it though.
     
  7. Thankful

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    I Really like this and it 'spoke to me'. Powerful message. It's really 'now'. But my comments for inprovement would be these:
    1. What happens from 4.35 is naff, boring, brings the track down.
    2. If you made the track about 20 BPMs slower you'd have (IMHO) a much beter track.

    Good stuff!
     
  8. Jazz-N-Stuff

    Jazz-N-Stuff Platinum Record

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    to better understand the "message", its taken from the great Dictator by Charlie Chaplin pls watch this
     
  9. foster911

    foster911 Guest

    @Jazz-N-Stuff
    What? Cubase 8.5? wow! so wealthy! Hope it would not be just prima facie.
     
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  10. G String

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    Nice.

    Ha - I used the same monologue from Charlie Chaplin for a track the other day - love the sentiment.
     
  11. Jazz-N-Stuff

    Jazz-N-Stuff Platinum Record

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    spread the message!
    its sad, but we still need it today more than ever...
    mankind should have learned their lesson after WW2.
     
  12. Herr Durr

    Herr Durr Guest

    overall really well done.. I like the tempo in fact.. would keep it the same.. I like the bass and kick throb you got going..

    I would agree.. maybe revisit the little break, seems to sort of set itself apart a bit much, but this is not my fave genre

    for sure.. though I do appreciate your effort and skill in this track... nice job
     
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